Australian Agents

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Really I’m getting the feeling that they’re a rare breed. I’d love to list them all but my list would be quickly out of date. Seems to be the place to go, it’s got a good reputation too. However it’s not like getting information on American or UK agents. For example:

The fifth agent down is the first agent on the list who at this point in time doesn’t have a note ‘not accepting new submissions’ and who does represent (or so it appears) young adult fantasy. So i google them and get mixed messages about whether to email first or not – so i email first and get a timely and polite no.

Moving on… there are only 12 other agents on the list and they all appear to not be accepting new submissions or not accept young adult fantasy.  One looks like a maybe so i put them into google – i get 2 hits!!!!

There aren’t enough exclamation marks to make my shock clear!!!!

There’s no interviews, no blogs by the agents, no articles by the agency, i can’t even find who to address my email to!

Come on Australia, we have to have good authors here, and great agents, and awesome publishing houses but we seem to be living in the dark ages! How’s an author supposed to present their work to the right people is the right people are no where to be found?

Which has lead me to Random House, I’m a complete mess with stress worrying over the send button that i just hit – yep it’s almost Australian Publishing Suicide… if they say no… owch…  I know how many agents will not accept a work once publishers have said no but look at that list – there’s only 17 agents willing to put the time in to get on the Aus Agents list  so how many other options do I have?

Here’s wishing Kayla good luck and wishing that the Australian Industry will grow up! (good luck to all those other Aussie writers wanting to be first time published out there) – fingers crossed.


Where to begin your story

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This little pondering is more for those with finished drafts than those working through their first draft. It is my opinion that in the first draft you should just go for it! Don’t hold back, put it all on paper… then when you come back to do your second draft you can get picky and fussy and cut things out and change this or that.

So you’ve got your first draft finished, you’re working through it again and wondering where to begin the story… (or maybe you’re not but the stories beginning is a good thing to wonder about)

I have read lots of articles and blogs etc where people say not to drag out the intro too much – cut to the chase, avoid pages where characters are just doing ‘stuff’ – like going to work or school or for a walk… yawn…

On the other hand you want to set your character up in the readers mind, how does your character thing or feel and so on. You want to draw the reader into their world – which may be the world of a boring 9-5 job and the adventure of a once a quater haircut appointment.

One way to think about it is to consider if cutting the first five pages from the story would be all that bad? Would anything vital go missing?

What about the next five pages? Anything really important in them?

Does your Main character describe some event in your first five pages (or 10 etc)? can you change this so that instead of a recount you put the reader into that event? Either by changing the timeline or by skipping a few years to the next part in the story – as examples.

One thing i do hear time and time again is that your first line has to grab the agent… then maybe you can grab the reader… and the first five pages have to sell the whole book so there’s no point reading this post and saying or thinking something like ‘yeah but all my action starts on page fifty and the ending’s really good so i don’t have to change the beginning.’

If you really don’t want to cut anything from the beginning try saving that draft under a different name and playing with an alternative copy of the story – so if in the end you don’t like your revisions you can always go back to the untouched copy and try a different angle.

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